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ChineseAI味审校
AI-Tone Content Review
何时使用此Skill
When to Use This Skill
当用户出现以下任一需求时,使用此技能:
- 提到内容"AI味太重"、"像AI写的"、"太机械"
- 要求"降低AI检测率"、"更像人写的"、"自然一些"
- 需要"口语化"、"有温度"、"接地气"的表达
- 内容被AI检测工具标记为高AI概率
- 希望文章更具个性和真实感
Use this skill when users have any of the following needs:
- Mention that the content is "too AI-like", "sounds written by AI", or "too mechanical"
- Request to "reduce AI detection rate", "make it more human-like", or "make it more natural"
- Need expressions that are "colloquial", "warm", or "down-to-earth"
- Content is marked as high AI probability by AI detection tools
- Hope to make the article more personalized and authentic
核心目标
Core Objective
通过系统化的三遍审校流程,将内容的AI检测率从80-100%降低至30%以下,让文章更具人味和真实性。
Through a systematic three-round review process, reduce the AI detection rate of content from 80-100% to below 30%, making the article more human-like and authentic.
执行流程
Execution Process
第一遍:内容结构调整 (P0级检查)
First Round: Content Structure Adjustment (P0 Priority Check)
目标:修复明显的AI结构特征
检查要点:
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避免教科书式结构
- ❌ "首先...其次...最后..."的机械结构
- ✅ 使用自然的转折和过渡
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避免定义式开头
- ❌ "什么是XX?XX是指..."
- ✅ 直接切入主题或使用引子开头
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避免总结式结尾
- ❌ "综上所述,总而言之..."
- ✅ 自然收尾或留有余韵
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增加个人化表达
- 插入个人观点、经历、感受
- 使用"我觉得"、"在我看来"等表达
Objective: Fix obvious structural characteristics of AI-generated content
Check Points:
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Avoid textbook-style structures
- ❌ Mechanical structures like "First... Second... Finally..."
- ✅ Use natural transitions and connections
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Avoid definition-style openings
- ❌ "What is XX? XX refers to..."
- ✅ Directly dive into the topic or use an introductory hook
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Avoid summary-style endings
- ❌ "In summary, to conclude..."
- ✅ End naturally or leave a lingering impression
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Add personalized expressions
- Insert personal opinions, experiences, and feelings
- Use expressions like "I think", "in my opinion", etc.
第二遍:语言风格优化 (P1级检查)
Second Round: Language Style Optimization (P1 Priority Check)
目标:让语言更自然、更有温度
检查要点:
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替换书面化词汇
- ❌ "进行"、"实现"、"提供"
- ✅ "做"、"完成"、"给"
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增加口语化表达
- ❌ "该产品具备..."、"此方法..."
- ✅ "这个产品能..."、"这个方法..."
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使用生活化比喻
- 结合日常生活经验打比方
- 避免过于专业的抽象表达
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调整句式节奏
- 长短句结合,避免全是长句
- 适当使用设问、感叹等句式
Objective: Make the language more natural and warm
Check Points:
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Replace formal written vocabulary
- ❌ Formal words like "conduct", "realize", "provide"
- ✅ Use casual alternatives like "do", "accomplish", "give"
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Add colloquial expressions
- ❌ Formal phrases like "This product features...", "This method..."
- ✅ Use casual phrases like "This product can...", "This method..."
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Use life-related metaphors
- Draw analogies from daily life experiences
- Avoid overly professional abstract expressions
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Adjust sentence rhythm
- Combine long and short sentences; avoid all long sentences
- Appropriately use rhetorical questions, exclamations, etc.
第三遍:细节润色 (P2级检查)
Third Round: Detail Polishing (P2 Priority Check)
目标:增加真实感和可信度
检查要点:
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增加具体细节
- 补充时间、地点、人物等具体信息
- 使用数字、百分比等量化表达
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添加情绪色彩
- 适当表达惊讶、失望、兴奋等情绪
- 使用感叹词、语气词增加感染力
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优化连接词
- 减少"因此"、"然而"、"另外"等正式连接词
- 使用"不过"、"而且"、"对了"等口语连接
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检查逻辑合理性
- 确保论证过程自然流畅
- 避免过于完美的逻辑闭环
Objective: Enhance authenticity and credibility
Check Points:
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Add specific details
- Supplement specific information such as time, location, characters, etc.
- Use quantitative expressions like numbers, percentages, etc.
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Add emotional coloring
- Appropriately express emotions like surprise, disappointment, excitement, etc.
- Use interjections and modal particles to increase appeal
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Optimize conjunctions
- Reduce formal conjunctions like "therefore", "however", "additionally"
- Use casual conjunctions like "though", "also", "by the way", etc.
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Check logical rationality
- Ensure the argumentation process is natural and smooth
- Avoid overly perfect logical closed loops
质量标准
Quality Standards
- AI检测率 < 30%
- 保持原意不变
- 增加至少3个个人化表达
- 语言风格与目标读者匹配
最后更新:2024年
- AI detection rate < 30%
- Keep the original meaning unchanged
- Add at least 3 personalized expressions
- Language style matches the target audience
Last Updated: 2024