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Story Review

故事文稿审阅

Analytical review of existing prose. This skill is for diagnosis, not rewriting. Keep

/reader-sim

separate when the task needs a felt first-time reader experience rather than analytical critique.

Choose the review level before reading. Start big before small unless the caller explicitly asks for a late-stage pass. The edit levels move from structural to surface, and each assumes the levels above it are stable:

Editorial review — holistic third-party book-editor pass. What kind of revision does this draft need, and in what order?
Developmental edit — structure, promise, causality, pacing, character arc. Is the draft the right shape?
Line edit — voice, rhythm, clarity, texture. Does the prose move well?
Copyedit — grammar, usage, punctuation, consistency. Is it correct?
Proofreading — final surface pass. What slipped through?

Each level has a dedicated resource with method and checklist:

```
resources/editorial-review.md
```
```
resources/developmental-edit.md
```
```
resources/line-edit.md
```
```
resources/copyedit.md
```
```
resources/proofreading.md
```

For adversarial craft critique (as opposed to editorial review), load:

```
resources/prose-critique.md
```
— methodology and focus-area routing.
```
resources/prose-critique/
```
— deep resources per focus area (structure, character, voice, prose, continuity).

When review incorporates reader-sim data:

```
resources/reader-sim-signal.md
```
— how to interpret and synthesize reader-sim output alongside analytical critique.

针对已完成文稿的分析性审阅。此技能用于诊断文稿问题，而非重写文稿。当任务需要模拟首次读者的直观阅读体验而非分析性点评时，请单独使用

/reader-sim

。

阅读前先选择审阅层级。除非请求方明确要求进行后期阶段的审阅，否则应从宏观到微观逐步进行。编辑层级从结构层面到表面层面递进，每一层级都默认其上层级的内容是稳定的：

编辑评审 — 第三方图书编辑视角的全面审阅。此草稿需要进行哪些类型的修订，以及修订的顺序如何？
发展性编辑 — 聚焦结构、核心设定、因果逻辑、叙事节奏、人物弧光。草稿的整体框架是否合理？
逐行编辑 — 聚焦文风、节奏、清晰度、文本质感。文稿的表达是否流畅自然？
文案编辑 — 聚焦语法、用词、标点、一致性。文稿是否符合规范？
校对 — 最终的表面检查。有哪些遗漏的问题？

每个层级都有对应的专用资源，包含方法和检查清单：

```
resources/editorial-review.md
```
```
resources/developmental-edit.md
```
```
resources/line-edit.md
```
```
resources/copyedit.md
```
```
resources/proofreading.md
```

如需针对性的写作技巧点评（区别于编辑评审），请调用以下资源：

```
resources/prose-critique.md
```
— 包含方法论和聚焦领域指引。
```
resources/prose-critique/
```
— 各聚焦领域的深度资源（结构、人物、文风、文稿、连贯性）。

当审阅需要整合reader-sim数据时：

```
resources/reader-sim-signal.md
```
— 讲解如何解读并将reader-sim输出与分析性点评进行整合。